Wednesday, December 8, 2010

theeee..jungle. 27-28

JURGIS...wow. i honestly think he is never going to die; no matter what he does he skips death. 2 people die in this reading and somehow i dont feel as bad as i use to. i mean so many people die per chapter its just getting old and boring...no offence Upoin but your writing is really boring. so jurgis neices?....they turn into whores. and they sell there body for some cash money yo. this makes me really sad becasue they thought that was there last resort. which makes alot of since; jobs are tough to find these days. i feel bad that they alsp get hooked on drugs and get a whole bunch of other girls on drugs also. well even though at the end of the reading they get out of selling and stuff...they are still hooked on drugs..which is not surprising eithere just because drugs are very hard to get unhooked and obviously they arent just going to stop right away. but other then that nothing else stook out for me.

6 comments:

  1. Merrisa,

    This is a difficult story and I happy to see that you are responding to the text. In the first underlined sentence, you did a great job of using the semi-colon. The second sentence was not as successful. Lets talk about this again in class today.

    Mr. J

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  2. Merrisa,
    I agree with you. This chatper was very hard and i cant belive there prostitutes now, they made me very sad. Drugs are a powerful thing in this world; They can really screw with the soul. I am so happy that we are best friends, like you have no idea.You are a great person inside imagine but i havent seen your liver so i wouldnt no, but your also ver beautfiul :)
    I love you so much merris.

    Xoxo-
    Claire :)

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  3. Good response. I liked how it was more response than summary. This was nice, but spelling could be a little better. Keep on bloggin'!

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  4. I really enjoyed reading your blog! I agree that after so many deaths in this book I don't get as sad.

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  5. I like to see how angry you got with this reading. I completely agree with everything you said! I can't believe they're prostitutes and I think that Upton's writing is extremely boring as well! Good job!

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  6. jahjahjah....
    thankes for the comment lol but im better if i move but imma miss you dude!!!!
    <3

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