chapters 4,5

Chapter 4
in this chapter i was really surprised that nick and Gat went to new york. this was very surprising because you would never think that Gat would be so open about his past...although he was sharing i couldnt help but not believe anything they were saying to each other. it felt as if they were lyying about everything. i wonder if nick is a really good liar or a really bad story teller. i just wish that i could get some better answers. this chapter was also very confusing because they would jump back and forth on everything. i really liked how everyone was open about there life and how they feel about things...if only it was true.

Chapter 5
oh my goodness! i cant believe stinken Gats. he was bribing nick to be his friend.well. at least i thought he was. this was really hard to believe. Gats wants nick to like him so much and it feels like thats never going to happen. when you show off your riches and treasures in my opionion its just bragging and i wouldnt want to be a friend to someone who is like that. but of course thats how nick and daisy act. they love there money so much and its taken over there life in my thinking. i just wish this chapter was a little more happy. it felt really dull also. it just felt like they would talk about the same thing over and over and over.

the GREAT G.(gangster)

In this chapter I really liked how descriptive Fitzgerald was about the great party of Gatsby. I found it somewhat odd that Gatsby randomly invited Nick when he hadnt ever talked to Nick in the past. I also am very curious to find out what it is that Gatsby told Jordan Baker. I wonder if all of the rumors stated about Gatsby in this chapter are really true or if Gatsby is another man whos true past is much different.  It was interesting that Gatsby found Nicks name familiar and claimed that he had known him in the war. This book is becoming very interesting and is turning into a great read. not only did it make me interested but it made me really think about how parties are such a blast and i take them for granted sometimes. James Gatz has made a huge impacted on my life just by reading one chapter. i am very proud to say that i really enjoyed this chapter like it was my own child(:  hahhah i know im not suppose to use this kind of writing in my writing but who cares?> its suppose to be my point of view...so hahaha. to all who think this was a bad reflection!

I love Drew Harsh... By: Merrisa Harsh

FREE write...hahahaha.....not really(:

1. i am apprehensive about my writing because i don't like people judging me and how i write. i feel like if someones writing is better then mine then perhaps they will make fun of me or think bad about me. i wonder if others are thinking that this person is stupid and has no idea how to write......
2.i fear that after the class is over they will not want to review my writing nor let me review Theirs.. i don't want anyone to think that i am incapable of doing well.
3.the best case scenario that could happen is i get sick and i go to the nurse and i get skipped on the whole looking at my writing. or maybe something happens with every single computer in the school and all of my writing is deleted. that would be a miracle.
4.the worse scenario would be that none of the things i said up there ^ wouldn't happen and i had to share my writing. Claire did a good thing not coming today,...i should of fallowed her advise. ughhh.......but Claire is really sick. lol. i just wish all of her breathing on me would have worked yesterday!!!!!

the cold makes me.........

the cold is awful! i feel as if i want to cry when i am out in the frezzing winter!!! when im inside with Drew i feel so much better. okay. so you got me. i like the snow..and yeah its cold. but i like it because when your driving with your friends around town in the slush and what not it can be alot of fun!!! i love making cookies in the parking lot. and snow angels in the front yard. i love playin with the snow when i am with my loved ones(:

FREE WRITEE(:

okay so in my freddy D essay it seems as though i got off topic a ton of times. i had many good points that i just didnt expand on it. i wish as if i would of expanded more on it. i needed to fallow the steps to write a good eassy. in my eassys i get board and i want to write more on the topis rather then so little..and i dont have a ton of imformation on the topis. so i guess i need to do more researching. other then that..haah(: oh gosh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so this is a free write i am allowed to go off topic. so gosh i made a cake last night and its sooooo good(:::::::::::::::::::::::::::::((((((:::: oh my im going to start a fight to day...oooooo child!!!(:

my reaction on the AWAKING

i liked this book a lot because it really made me think how good our society is. i mean our country lets women think for themselves. i really liked how Edna finally discovers what she should do with her life. she stands up for herself and that really reminded me of me. i thought that it was really important that she moved out. because everyone knows her ex husband is never going to change. i felt a deep sorta dislike towards him just because he believe women belong in the kitchen and they should take care of everyone...when in reality it should be both ways. there should be an equal amount of work. and not all of the stress on one person. i felt a really big connection to Edna because she is very strong willed like me. she made me think about how you shouldn't sit around and just think about doing something but really do it. i enjoyed reading this book and i think that this book had a true true meaning and impact on my life!!!!