FREE WRITEE(:

okay so in my freddy D essay it seems as though i got off topic a ton of times. i had many good points that i just didnt expand on it. i wish as if i would of expanded more on it. i needed to fallow the steps to write a good eassy. in my eassys i get board and i want to write more on the topis rather then so little..and i dont have a ton of imformation on the topis. so i guess i need to do more researching. other then that..haah(: oh gosh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so this is a free write i am allowed to go off topic. so gosh i made a cake last night and its sooooo good(:::::::::::::::::::::::::::::((((((:::: oh my im going to start a fight to day...oooooo child!!!(: