chapter 8&9

chapter 8:
i really liked this chapter because this really made me feel like i was so lucky to have my family and friends. Gats is so lonley and i just wish he had someone to vent to . he has such a hard life and i wish one day he will end up with daisy
Chpater 9:
oh my gosh!! are you kidding me? mirdal is such a jerk. i cant believe he died. i cried so so hard and i think this chapter was the hardest to read because of all the bad things that happend. he was such a good guy.

chapters 6-7(:

Chapter 6!
this chapter really made me very surprised to hear about Gats more. i really am proud of him to keep his promise to his friend and not drink. its not surprising to me taht Gats is a good guy. it seem like he has a really good heart and i really like that about him. he is not so mysteriuos anymore. I am really angry at tom because he cheats on his wife. but he brings her to parties thrown by someone he doesnt like. honestly. if you dont like him then dont come goodness. i think that this chapter really opened my eyes to how shallow people can be.

Chapter 7
oh gosh those 2 love birds! i cant believe Gats was going to go to New york with Dasiy. i am really happy that tom is getting jealous because now he might acctually not cheat on his wife and so something nice for her rather then leave her at home all day everyday. i cant believe that Gats had the guts to take the blame for Daisy "accidently" hitting Murtle. i think that shows that he loves her alot. but come on. who are they fooling? i know Daisy meant to hit her. shoot im sure she would do that 3 more times with an extra truck. i can totally understand where she is coming from but she took it way to far. i mean talk to the girl.. not hit her with a car. (:

chapters 4,5

Chapter 4
in this chapter i was really surprised that nick and Gat went to new york. this was very surprising because you would never think that Gat would be so open about his past...although he was sharing i couldnt help but not believe anything they were saying to each other. it felt as if they were lyying about everything. i wonder if nick is a really good liar or a really bad story teller. i just wish that i could get some better answers. this chapter was also very confusing because they would jump back and forth on everything. i really liked how everyone was open about there life and how they feel about things...if only it was true.

Chapter 5
oh my goodness! i cant believe stinken Gats. he was bribing nick to be his friend.well. at least i thought he was. this was really hard to believe. Gats wants nick to like him so much and it feels like thats never going to happen. when you show off your riches and treasures in my opionion its just bragging and i wouldnt want to be a friend to someone who is like that. but of course thats how nick and daisy act. they love there money so much and its taken over there life in my thinking. i just wish this chapter was a little more happy. it felt really dull also. it just felt like they would talk about the same thing over and over and over.

the GREAT G.(gangster)

In this chapter I really liked how descriptive Fitzgerald was about the great party of Gatsby. I found it somewhat odd that Gatsby randomly invited Nick when he hadnt ever talked to Nick in the past. I also am very curious to find out what it is that Gatsby told Jordan Baker. I wonder if all of the rumors stated about Gatsby in this chapter are really true or if Gatsby is another man whos true past is much different.  It was interesting that Gatsby found Nicks name familiar and claimed that he had known him in the war. This book is becoming very interesting and is turning into a great read. not only did it make me interested but it made me really think about how parties are such a blast and i take them for granted sometimes. James Gatz has made a huge impacted on my life just by reading one chapter. i am very proud to say that i really enjoyed this chapter like it was my own child(:  hahhah i know im not suppose to use this kind of writing in my writing but who cares?> its suppose to be my point of view...so hahaha. to all who think this was a bad reflection!

I love Drew Harsh... By: Merrisa Harsh

FREE write...hahahaha.....not really(:

1. i am apprehensive about my writing because i don't like people judging me and how i write. i feel like if someones writing is better then mine then perhaps they will make fun of me or think bad about me. i wonder if others are thinking that this person is stupid and has no idea how to write......
2.i fear that after the class is over they will not want to review my writing nor let me review Theirs.. i don't want anyone to think that i am incapable of doing well.
3.the best case scenario that could happen is i get sick and i go to the nurse and i get skipped on the whole looking at my writing. or maybe something happens with every single computer in the school and all of my writing is deleted. that would be a miracle.
4.the worse scenario would be that none of the things i said up there ^ wouldn't happen and i had to share my writing. Claire did a good thing not coming today,...i should of fallowed her advise. ughhh.......but Claire is really sick. lol. i just wish all of her breathing on me would have worked yesterday!!!!!

the cold makes me.........

the cold is awful! i feel as if i want to cry when i am out in the frezzing winter!!! when im inside with Drew i feel so much better. okay. so you got me. i like the snow..and yeah its cold. but i like it because when your driving with your friends around town in the slush and what not it can be alot of fun!!! i love making cookies in the parking lot. and snow angels in the front yard. i love playin with the snow when i am with my loved ones(:

FREE WRITEE(:

okay so in my freddy D essay it seems as though i got off topic a ton of times. i had many good points that i just didnt expand on it. i wish as if i would of expanded more on it. i needed to fallow the steps to write a good eassy. in my eassys i get board and i want to write more on the topis rather then so little..and i dont have a ton of imformation on the topis. so i guess i need to do more researching. other then that..haah(: oh gosh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so this is a free write i am allowed to go off topic. so gosh i made a cake last night and its sooooo good(:::::::::::::::::::::::::::::((((((:::: oh my im going to start a fight to day...oooooo child!!!(:

my reaction on the AWAKING

i liked this book a lot because it really made me think how good our society is. i mean our country lets women think for themselves. i really liked how Edna finally discovers what she should do with her life. she stands up for herself and that really reminded me of me. i thought that it was really important that she moved out. because everyone knows her ex husband is never going to change. i felt a deep sorta dislike towards him just because he believe women belong in the kitchen and they should take care of everyone...when in reality it should be both ways. there should be an equal amount of work. and not all of the stress on one person. i felt a really big connection to Edna because she is very strong willed like me. she made me think about how you shouldn't sit around and just think about doing something but really do it. i enjoyed reading this book and i think that this book had a true true meaning and impact on my life!!!!

ChaPTER. (LAST) 31

Comma
simicolen....
okay so in this chAPTEr Jurgis gets really excited to tell people about Soicalisum;he thinks its a big deal.i did like this chapter, just because it was really influenctal on how Jurgis thinks and sorta how we should think . i felt extremly sad when marji, Jurgis sister says that prostatution is always going to be in her life becasue she makes good money. i really think that this book was really good and Jurgis was a very easy going guy i really liked this book even thhough i compplained about it alot. i just dont like reading in general...which i wont do over break..becasue i want to do this enjoyable. kokay. so anyways. Jurgis makes me extremly happy about how he takes the news of his sister staying a Hoe. he doesnt drink or anything. i think that Jurgis went through a rough patch and i dont blame him America is hard. highschool is hard. life is hard and you just got to find a good way to release all the bad tention from the world.

the jungle....29-30..what evs.(:

Sentence; sentence
comma thingy.
normal..(:

chapter 29 was a very good sorta sum of what this book is about. they were talking about socialisum and stuff like that. i really didnt like this chapter; it bored me to death!!! although this book was really quite boring this was one of the boringest chapters i have read. i just wanted to get it over with. maybe its because he is a guy writer. and for some reason i get really board with men books. it seems like they are trying to way to prove something, i dont understand it more when they do that.
Chapter 30,
okay so in this chapter Jurgis goes back to his friend to see her. this makes me extremely happy; Jurgis trys to explain his point on socialisum.  Jurgis has a really soft personality in my opionion because all though so much has gone horrible in his life he trys to make the best of it and it makes me sad that no one can be brave enough to do this also, i want to be strong just like him(: so i like this chapter out of most of the chapters because he didnt judge Teta Elzbieta like most people would DO!!!(:

theeee..jungle. 27-28

JURGIS...wow. i honestly think he is never going to die; no matter what he does he skips death. 2 people die in this reading and somehow i dont feel as bad as i use to. i mean so many people die per chapter its just getting old and boring...no offence Upoin but your writing is really boring. so jurgis neices?....they turn into whores. and they sell there body for some cash money yo. this makes me really sad becasue they thought that was there last resort. which makes alot of since; jobs are tough to find these days. i feel bad that they alsp get hooked on drugs and get a whole bunch of other girls on drugs also. well even though at the end of the reading they get out of selling and stuff...they are still hooked on drugs..which is not surprising eithere just because drugs are very hard to get unhooked and obviously they arent just going to stop right away. but other then that nothing else stook out for me.

chapter...26.

okay. so in this chapter Jurgis keeps his job!!!!! jurgis makes $3.00 a day, which is not very good but he is okay with it.I think that this chapter really showed how Jurgis is changing; he is changing for the bad. i think that now that Jurgis fingered our how to make fast cash he will just do that rather then earn it. i think that AMerica has messed up there life and i feel bad for everyone that leves here now. this makes me want to move to a different country by the way everything is persived now. i feel bad for imagrants because like Garcia said, it was most of them but they were still being treated badly. i think that this book really describes how awful it is to lose your family and live in a country with comunisum...or socialisum...however you spell that. but all though Jurgis is turning to drinking..i think that in a sence that is good because he is finding a way to cope with it rather then going off and killing people; which im sure he might do in the future by the way the auther makes this book so predictable.!! (:

chapters 23- 26!!

okay so these chapters were a huge struggle for me to read because....hmmm..let me see i had surgery and i was on 5 different pain meds..so im sorry if any of this doesnt make since. so i guess Jurgis gets a job making tunnels..this made me feel pretty good because he has something to be a little happy about. these chapters were really boring. after jurgis went to jail i felt like this book is just stupid because it keeps repeating itself on everything. like honestly..could the stinken auther think of anything new? so i guess he go to jail for beating up someone...bIG surpirse!!! but other then that..i didnt get much from these chapters. i skiped around a couple times..skipped like 10 pages..but i read what i thought would make me want to read more. and honestly i feel like i shouldnt even bother with this book anymore. maybe its because i am so mad that i am stinken in so much pain and i wasted my time reading this book when i could of been sleeping so i could feel better...well. now i am going to go to bed becasue i am in so much pain and i am not going to go to school. so might as well comment on peoples writing now. peace. have a nice day by the way guys!

chapters 20-23

Chapter 20
okay so i really liked this chapter because there was a little hope but not to much. Jurgis finally finds a job and does something with his life. i mean i think he was very determined to work and He finds out that he is black listed by Conner. that stinken jerky turkey!!!

Chapter 21

 This chapter was awful!!! his son..the only kid he has drowns in the mud..i mean why didn't he do anything? i feel horrible for Jurgis because he now wants just a family and he doesn't have one now...oh my goodness!

Chapter 22

what i got out of this chapter is that he leave the town and works for food and money...i cant believe in one night he spends it on women!!!!!!! what a playa playa.i was amazed...but this just shows he misses ona!! poor Jurgis! if i was in this book heck yes i could help him out....Not sexually..but to be a friend!

Chapter 23

WHAT IS WRONG WITH THIS GUY?!!!?!?!?? he goes into a church thing to stay warm...i mean thats soooooo smart but he is just crazy..he needs to stay put and just work. it seems like Jurgis turns into a workalolic! !! (:.

My blog for thanksgiving(:

i really liked how this reading was very interesting and full of life. sure i got board but i still enjoyed reading for once. i had a hard time understanding why they stayed in America after all the stuff they have been threw..i would of left for sure(: and oh my goodness!!!! how Jurgis wife got raped..that was so awful!! if i was him i would of completely done the same thing...i mean that is your wife and you want the person you are doing it with to only have it with you and not another person. that's why i completely agree with how he went by it.. but Jurgis shouldn't of went to jail! i mean that stupid boss guy deserved what he got. i feel bad for there family. it seems like every time things are going good they turn around and go awful!!! i wish that they will just go back, i would and i would never put up with the type of stuff America has brought to the table!

go ask Alice(:

Today I am reading go ask Alice. This was a good book. But it’s really just introducing her and her likes. She has a boy that she likes name roger. Roger rejects her one day and she is wondering why everyone thinks its okay to hurt her feelings. I feel extremely sorry for her because she is hooked on drugs. This makes me sad because I know many people who are hooked on drugs and it really hurts me inside because there wasting there life away. This also makes me sad because she believes it’s her only escape out of the world. My reaction to this book is that she is a very lonely girl. I used to be like her, well I wasn’t hooked on drugs but I use to be extremely sad and depressed. I too bought a book to write down all of my thoughts to make sure I got everything I needed to say out without hurting anyone’s feelings. I think that Alice is a very wise girl. Except that she is hooked on many drugs…well to be truthful I haven’t got to there yet. I heard about it and I really needed to get it out that I know that information. too sound smart(: I think that Alice is very young talented lady and it makes me wonder if anyone could just be hooked on drugs without thinking about it. I feel sorry that roger rejected her because I reject drew all the time just for fun and now I feel bad because I know how he feels now even though he tells me that he doesn’t like it every other day.

pages 41-72(: THE JUNGLE(:

in this chapter we find out that the sick animal meat and the healthy animal meat is put into the same thing and so you never find out weather or not it is safe. suppose ably a worker comes in and check all the meat once a month..but honestly a lot of bad meat could be put out within even a week. this really grossed me out and so i sorta stop halfway through because i was so disgusted with how they treat there meat. i mean this could kill many people by just being around it.
1. why wouldn't they just throw away the bad meat?
2. does anyone from the factory eat the meat they are putting out?
3. how does putting bad meat into good meat solve anything?
4.why would the he bring in his family to see this nastiness?
5. i understand why no one likes there job and complains.

this blog..

my topic is whether or not someone changes when they own a slave. In my opinion I think they do because after you treat humans like that you forget how to treat people you consider human. i think that my central argument is that humans shouldn't own other humans and treat them that way. When you treat someone so awful you get use to it and you lose that since of being a person.  At first you feel bad but then you get use to it. like If you Argue with your parents. at first you feel bad and don't want to do it again and then the second time you start liking it and after awhile you get use to it and don't feel bad and just think of it as a way of life. this doesn't make it okay nor does it make life better for either one. I feel like if you own a slave the first one would maybe be treated better then the last ones. You don't think anything of it until someone tells you its wrong and gives you reasons why its wrong and  kind of brings you back to how you should truly treat people.

Question and coments on the end(:

oh my goodness this reading was a really great one. what i got out of the ending was that Douglas is free and he gets married. I found this very amazing because marraige is a great thing to me and i love how people get married and just start a new life with others(:
Question: who is anna? is she his wife?
comment. i am proud of them(: